March 08, 2008 - 05:16 AM
q_Plung -
Nice demos, nice site.
Had to search quite a lot, but found a grammatical mistake! :P
In the "about" section theres a sentence:
"Later, after our first release, two people are joined to eXtrait: AqTech and Irwine."
"joined" and "are" are both verbs, and two verbs rarely stand in one clause. You should remove that unnecessary "are" from there, and the site will be just lovely! Had to add this, sorry. :P
Keep up guys!
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